Josefson’s Guide to Writing a
Reflective Paragraph
Introductory or topic sentence
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Introduces the topic of the paragraph. Don’t try to put everything into one sentence. Don’t try too hard to capture reader
interest. Don’t cite the dictionary. Ignore your high school teacher.
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Provides a transition from the preceding paragraph by building
on or referring to some idea in that paragraph. This transition is more important than providing an in-depth
explanation. Transitions provide logical flow.
Explains the topic of the paragraph in
more depth.
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Always put your maximum effort into the second sentence of a
paragraph. It’s the REAL topic
sentence.
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Each sentence builds on and transitions to ideas in the preceding
sentence. The best way to do this is to
use pronouns that have clear antecedents in the previous sentence. (For example: Some students will complain
my paragraph guidelines are stupid.
However, they are obviously wrong. They in the second
sentence is a pronoun with the antecedent some students in the
previous sentence.
Explores the author’s views on the
topic by comparing and/ or contrasting them with the material being
explained. Exploration clarifies the
author’s preconceptions so that they can be critically evaluated. Exploration also helps to clarify the
explanation of the topic.
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Reflect on views you the author have held on the subject. Say, for instance, Before I read this
author, I thought that…
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If you do not have clear preconceptions on the topic, explore
what you might have thought about the issue before you encountered the new
material you explained.
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Exploratory sentences identify some conflict, confusion, or
agreement between the new material and the author’s preconceptions that can
serve as the basis for further analysis.
Provides evidence for the point being
made in the paragraph. There are
several kinds of evidence, and you may use them in combination or more an one
of each. Never begin a paragraph with evidence, as it obstructs flow.
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Examples or illustrations. Use For example, For instance,
or tell a story based on your experience or common knowledge.
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Quote from a text.
Always introduce a quote. Never
start a sentence with a quote. Cite.
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Paraphrase from a text. Provide data or evidence from a text without quoting by
explaining the views of an author in your own words. Cite even when you are not quoting.
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Logical analysis.
Explain why an idea or view is either logical or illogical by exploring
fallacies or logic.
Just providing the evidence is not enough, especially
when your evidence is a quote. You need
to analyze the evidence in order to explain why it supports the idea of
the paragraph.
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For example: Dr. King says segregation “substitutes an ‘I-it’
relationship for an ‘I-thou’ relationship and ends up relegating persons to the
status of things” (King 1963, 13). When
he uses the word “thou”, he means it to invoke some of the sense of respect the
word connotes from its frequent use in the Bible to refer to God.
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Ideally your analysis should go beyond the evidence you provide
from other sources to offer new insights into the topic. Do this by drawing novel connections between
sources, by examining singular similarities between contrasting views, by
identifying distinct differences between largely similar views, or by exploring
your own unique ideas on the topic.
6. Synthesis
Sentences (1-2).
Do not just restate the central idea of the
paragraph. Rather, explore the
implications or consequences of what you have said in the paragraph in a way
that could point towards the next paragraph.
Synthesis explores the “now what?” question. What actions are required because of the reflection presented in
the paragraph.
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For example, the implication of the analysis of the King
quote above could be: King’s lesson here points beyond the issue of
segregation to direct us to identify all prejudices and institutions that keep
us from treating others with the respect of a Thou. There are still such institutions today.
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If this is the last paragraph you should still suggest or imply
certain actions on the part of the reader, further explorations, or
unresolved issues that could be addressed as a consequence of the ideas
presented in the paragraph.